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1. Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The bar graphs represent the
number
 of tourists visiting two cities in 2012. The numbers are demonstrated on the x-axis while the months are shown on the y-axis. In general, it can be observed that both the graphs show similar trends throughout the year where the
number
 of visitors peak in the months of July and August.
On the contrary
,
least
Suggestion
the least number
number
 of tourists were recorded in
months
Suggestion
the months
 of January and February for both Seattle and the Niagara Falls. The month of December shows a contrasting trend where the
number
 goes down in
Seattle but
Accept comma addition
Seattle, but
 shoots up for the Niagara Falls. An in-depth analysis of the graph of Seattle reveals that the
number
 of tourists visiting the city grows gradually from January-April, reaching 500,000. After
this
 point, there is a significant rise in the
number
 where it increases by 500,000 each month till July
reaching
Suggestion
reaches
is reaching
 a whopping 2
million
. After staying constant in August, the figure starts declining - steadily in September but tremendously in October - eventually closing at about 250,000 in December which is almost similar to the figure recorded in January. Similar to
this
, the
number
 of tourists visiting the Niagara Falls in 2012 doubles in the month of March where it touches the 1
million
 mark. After a jump of about a
million
 in April, the following months show a constant increase. July and August are the most favoured
months peaking
Accept comma addition
months, peaking
 at about 4
million
 visitors. After
dramatic fall
Suggestion
a dramatic fall
the dramatic fall
 in September and October, the
number
 steadies at 500,000 in November before shooting up again in December, reaching 2.5
million
.

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