Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
On one hand, a section of society thinks that parents play a vital
role
Use synonyms
in teaching moral
behaviour
Use synonyms
to
Suggestion
of
their children. Whereas,
on the other hand
Linking Words
, another section thinks that it is the responsibility of the school to make them learn good moral
behaviour
Use synonyms
.
in
Suggestion
In
my opinion
parents guidance
Accept comma addition
parents, guidance
plays a far more important
role
Use synonyms
in shaping the moral character of children than any education offered to them. In
this
Linking Words
essay, we shall discuss the importance of parents and the limitations of school when it comes to teaching good moral
behaviour
Use synonyms
to children. Parents are the
first
Linking Words
teacher a
child
Use synonyms
learns from and
therefor
(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result
therefore
their
role
Use synonyms
and impact
o
located at or attached to
on
of
a
child
Use synonyms
's
behaviour
Use synonyms
is very wide. Evidently, a
child
Use synonyms
learns almost every basic daily activity from its parents
such
Linking Words
as the way to eat food, the proper language acceptable in the society, cleanliness, tidiness etc.
Hence
Linking Words
, parents act as a foundation stone when it comes to the good moral character of a
child
Use synonyms
.
Besides
Linking Words
parents, school plays a limited
role
Use synonyms
in making children good moral citizens, as most of the schools focus more on education and sports
instead
Linking Words
of basic manners or basic moral
behaviour
Use synonyms
. In fact, our education system
also
Linking Words
emphasizes the fact that good manners and
behaviour
Use synonyms
are the responsibility of one's parents.
For instance
Linking Words
, most of the schools conduct quarterly parent-teacher meetings to not only report a
Use synonyms
child
Suggestion
child's
academic performance but
also
Linking Words
reports any misdemeanour conducted by him.
Consequently
Linking Words
, parents are expected to correct any
such
Linking Words
lapses on their wards part by taking necessary action. To conclude,
parents
Suggestion
parents'
habits,
behaviour
Use synonyms
,
language etc
Accept comma addition
language, etc.
language etc.
language arts
is easily
leant
gain knowledge or skills
learnt
learned
by their children and
hence
Linking Words
have a direct relation to their moral character.
whereas
Suggestion
Whereas
, schools have a very limited
role
Use synonyms
in seeking them as good citizens.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
What to do next:
Look at other essays: