Both the poor and the rich find the accessibility into University difficult. Do you agree or disagree?

Tertiary
education
has become incessantly exorbitant and competitive which has made securing
admission
in universities an arduous task. But is getting
admission
in higher
education
institute equally difficult for people with good financial background as it is for
poor
Suggestion
the poor
? While
this
is a contentious debate, I disagree and believe that individuals with affluent backgrounds are more likable to get into a university. The reasons for my
this
opinion are outlined below with supporting examples.
To begin
with, number of private universities
have inexorably increased
Suggestion
inexorably increase
in recent
years providing
Accept comma addition
years, providing
people with well-off backgrounds an easy opportunity to get
admission
there despite poor academic scores. To be specific,
in contrast
to public sector universities, private universities charge far higher fees and
thus
only students coming from the strong financial background can afford them.
For instance
, private medical colleges in Pakistan offer admissions to students who have very poor academic records but charge them
high
Suggestion
higher
fees. Indeed, if one has the financial means to afford
costly
Suggestion
a costly education, then
a costly education then
education
then
its
it is
it's
easy to
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
into a tertiary level educational institute.
Moreover
, it is observed that universities have set high application charges causing people to apply to less universities.
As a result
, applying in fewer number of institutes result into
less probability
Suggestion
the less probability
a less probability
of getting
admission
.
For example
, since I applied in more than twenty universities for
admission
after my intermediate, it resulted into
higher probability
Suggestion
a higher probability
of acceptance.
Hence
, as it costs
significant amount
Suggestion
a significant amount
of money to apply in
large number
Suggestion
a large number
of universities, it is difficult for individuals from marginalized section of society to secure
admission
into universities. In conclusion, because private universities have dominated
education
sector, now it is possible to get into higher
education
institutes
inspite
Suggestion
in spite
of mediocre academic records.
Also
, owing to high application fees of universities, it is difficult for people from poor background to apply for multitude of universities and
thus
resulting
into
Suggestion
in
less probability of securing
admission
.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: