Both the poor and the rich find the accessibility into University difficult. Do you agree or disagree?

Tertiary

education

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has become incessantly exorbitant and competitive which has made securing

admission

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in universities an arduous task. But is getting

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in higher

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institute equally difficult for people with good financial background as it is for

poor

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the poor

? While

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is a contentious debate, I disagree and believe that individuals with affluent backgrounds are more likable to get into a university. The reasons for my

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opinion are outlined below with supporting examples.

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with, number of private universities

have inexorably increased

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inexorably increase

in recent

years providing

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years, providing

people with well-off backgrounds an easy opportunity to get

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there despite poor academic scores. To be specific,

in contrast

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to public sector universities, private universities charge far higher fees and

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only students coming from the strong financial background can afford them.

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, private medical colleges in Pakistan offer admissions to students who have very poor academic records but charge them

high

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higher

fees. Indeed, if one has the financial means to afford

costly

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a costly education, then

a costly education then

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then

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its

it is

it's

easy to

enroll

register formally as a participant or member

enrol

into a tertiary level educational institute.

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, it is observed that universities have set high application charges causing people to apply to less universities.

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, applying in fewer number of institutes result into

less probability

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the less probability

a less probability

of getting

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.

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, since I applied in more than twenty universities for

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after my intermediate, it resulted into

higher probability

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a higher probability

of acceptance.

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, as it costs

significant amount

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a significant amount

of money to apply in

large number

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a large number

of universities, it is difficult for individuals from marginalized section of society to secure

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into universities. In conclusion, because private universities have dominated

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sector, now it is possible to get into higher

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inspite

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in spite

of mediocre academic records.

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, owing to high application fees of universities, it is difficult for people from poor background to apply for multitude of universities and

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resulting

into

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in

less probability of securing

admission

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.