Nowadays, many medical projects are funded by private companies. In your opinion, do you think that research should be carried by private companies,individuals or government? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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These days, a plethora of medical researches
are carrying
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is carried
is carrying
out by many individual countries. In
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,
majority
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the majority
of the projects are sponsored by the private sector or by some wealthy individuals. In my view, the experimental fund of medical
should be carry
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should carry
should be carried
by the team of the
government
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, which can have
higher number
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a higher number
of benefits when compare with other funds.
Firstly
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, each and every new experimental work of medical should not by conduct without the knowledge of the
government
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. The project will have either a
postive
characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.
positive
or negative
result
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, if the latter
result
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comes the
country
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should
also
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take the
responsiblity
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
of the problem,
eventhough
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even though
research is carried out by
a
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an
individual or some group of people. To overcome
this
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kind of problem, authority of the
government
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can
fund
come upon, as if by accident; meet with
find
all types of researches for the medical development.
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will lead the project workers to move in a right path without any collapse and positive
result
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of an experiment
have
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has
a good remark in the world market
for
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in
the
country
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, who successfully achieved it.
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, the
country
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can have a pattern
rights
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right
for the
solution
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for any medical problem.
For example
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, a nation
achieve
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achieves
a
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for cancer disease have to register that we have found
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solution
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, no one can use
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in any
country
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without their permission.
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, the surrounding countries want to have medicine should pay money to the
country
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having rights of that medicine. So, the
country
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can earn the money what invested in that medical project.
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, the medicine can be freely given to the people of that nation, who introduced the
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. To conclude, the private companies cannot do the research without any drawbacks and black mark will be for both company and that
country
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. While the medical experiment carry by the
government
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have a proper
result
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and level of status be
increase
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an increase
in the world market.
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