Many people today use their phones for sending texts more than talking. What are the reasons for this? are there more advantages than disadvatages ?

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The usage of smartphones for sending messages has been increased since few years.There are many advantages and disadvantages

for

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sending texts other than direct

intraction

a mutual or reciprocal action; interacting

interaction

in traction

instruction

Suggestion

It's

quiet easy

Accept comma addition

quiet, easy

to transfer

texts

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text

from one

place

Use synonyms

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

place

Use synonyms

For instance

Linking Words

, Sending important details and other information to a far

place

Use synonyms

can be easy as it

also

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consumes less time.Text messages

conveys

Suggestion

convey

more information than direct interaction to a person.We can usually transfer the news at any time and

place

Use synonyms

Compare

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Compared

to past

years sending

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years, sending

messages is easy other than writing letters for large distances.So, it consumes less time for a text. In recent years, many social networks are helpful for sending messages.But it makes people lazy as they send texts for short distances.

For example

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, people

now a days

the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech

nowadays

are using texts for sending a person who is beside them. It weakens the relationship with the other people.The feeling of direct interaction with people can be effected and hard to convey our emotions through

directive

Suggestion

direct

. In conclusion, Sending messages other than talking can be more beneficial.It must be used for limited range and strengthen the communication with the people.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

185 words

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Many people today use their phones for sending texts more than talking. What are the reasons for this? are there more advantages than disadvatages ?

Fully explain your ideas

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