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Many people today use their phones for sending texts more than talking. What are the reasons for this? are there more advantages than disadvatages ?

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The usage of smartphones for sending messages has been increased since few years.There are many advantages and disadvantages
for
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of
 sending texts other than direct
intraction
a mutual or reciprocal action; interacting
interaction
in traction
instruction
.
It
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It's
quiet easy
Accept comma addition
quiet, easy
 to transfer
texts
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text
 from one
place
 to
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
place
.
For instance
, Sending important details and other information to a far
place
 can be easy as it
also
 consumes less time.Text messages
conveys
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convey
 more information than direct interaction to a person.We can usually transfer the news at any time and
place
.
Compare
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Compared
 to past
years sending
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years, sending
 messages is easy other than writing letters for large distances.So, it consumes less time for a text. In recent years, many social networks are helpful for sending messages.But it makes people lazy as they send texts for short distances.
For example
, people
now a days
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
 are using texts for sending a person who is beside them. It weakens the relationship with the other people.The feeling of direct interaction with people can be effected and hard to convey our emotions through
directive
Suggestion
direct
. In conclusion, Sending messages other than talking can be more beneficial.It must be used for limited range and strengthen the communication with the people.
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