Some people think that we can use as much fresh water as we want. Others think that fresh water supply should be controlled strictly by governments as the sources are limited. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Water

is the most common liquid found on earth. While most part of our planet is covered with

water

, fresh

water

that can be used for drinking, cooking and other activities is quite less. Despite the aforementioned fact, some people still give themselves the right to use fresh

water

in an unrestricted way. Others oppose that it is necessary for the authorities to strictly control the amount of

water

usage. From my perspective, I side the latter opinion;

however

this

essay will still discuss both points of view.

Although

it is certain that

humanities

Suggestion

the humanities

will have enough fresh

water

for at least the

100 years, but still, it is a limited resource. If people freely allow themselves to use clean

water

even in an extravagant way, it is

obviously

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obvious

that they will put their

generations under a risk of having no fresh

water

to use.

Otherwise

, I agree that

water

resource should be accessible

for

Suggestion

every one’s needs, especially for agriculture and industries, they all need a large supply of

water

for producing.

However

, there should be a consideration in using

water

for any purposes. They can take simple actions to consume it more efficiently, like turning off taps whenever they are brushing or shaving, and finding opportunities to conserve

water

in their home. The main purpose of controlling the

water

usage after all is to ensure that there are no knock-on effects on our

generations and there is always available

water

for everybody. So, in my opinion, the government plays an important role in raising awareness and encouraging a

revelation

a drastic and far-reaching change in ways of thinking and behaving

revolution

in public. They can educate their citizens

Suggestion

about

how vital is our action today can effect on the future or basically, passing

water

-saving ordinances. In conclusion, no one can deny the importance of

water

, especially fresh

water

in our daily lives. Individual responsibility as well as the government’s role should be considered to conserve

water

resource.

Otherwise

water

still can be accessible to everyone’s needs, but not for waste.

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

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Complete response

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Relevant & specific examples

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