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Nowadays an increased amount of garbage waste is a real concern, why this is happening? what can be done to resolve this?

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Introduction
People are increasingly adding many rubbish to the environment without any control. A growing number of disposable
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 usage could be the main reason for
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 issue.
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, implementation of a proper
waste
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 management system can resolve
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 issue up to some extent
Body paragraph 1
Nowadays, many companies tend to manufacture many disposable products in order to make one's life easier. These products can be bought at a very low cost,
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 people tend to use them extensively.
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, anyone can go to a supermarket and purchase some disposable plastic cups at a very low cost so people have drastically increased using these products when there is party over other functions,
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 will help them to save some time after the event as they can easily throw the
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 away. These products will
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 be added to the environment as garbage causing much detrimental importance to the environment
Body paragraph 2
In fact, it is required to manufacture these kinds of disposable
product
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 to simplify human lives. There should be a proper method implemented to dispose and recycle these products. If one can properly dispose their
waste
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, it is easy to classify them and recycle them to manufacture other products without having any issues.
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, India has built a road by using disposable plastic bottles. They have converted the garbage into some other material and use those to build the entire road which can be one of the best solutions to the garbage problem in the world
Conclusion
In conclusion, an increasing number of places
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,
facing issues with the amount of
waste
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 in their areas. Usage of disposable
product
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 considered to be the main reason for
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 implementation of proper
waste
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 management and recycling is the best solution to overcome
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 issue

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