Some people think schools should teach students to form good behaviour in addition to providing formal education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Today, our perception of

education

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is changing more than ever, compares to the past. Beside the major responsibility of schools in teaching and educating, some believe that schools is

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where children learn

how behave

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how to behave

well. From my perspective, I agree with

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statement.

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, school is a place children spend most of the time

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their home, so one

way

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or another, they are likely to mimic

behaviors

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviours

that can come from their peers or their teachers. In turn, it would be wise if people took that chance to teach students the

way

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to conduct well towards others, especially elderly people. In that

way

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, youngsters are able to develop themselves in terms of moral aspect. In some cases, children

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have a tendency towards taking their friends as a role model, which

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make them try to fit in by imitating others.

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, it is necessary for schools to provide character

education

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that create an affectionate environment for children to study and merge in. Another reason is children nowadays get exposed to several negative influences through

media

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the media

, so schools play a vital role in tracking their

behaviors

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviours

that can help teachers take specific actions to reshaping children’s perception.

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, showing examples of good character is a fine

way

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to instill moral values in them.

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this

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type of

education

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teaches students the values of caring about other people, honesty, responsibility, and other important traits that make for an upstanding citizen. In conclusion, the character

education

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is as essential as academic teaching not just in terms of

morality but

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morality, but

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as a necessary factor to be successful in life.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

270 words

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Some people think schools should teach students to form good behaviour in addition to providing formal education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation. Such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both points and express your opinion.

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