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The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

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Although
 there has been tremendous growth in the dissemination and consumption of information through the internet in recent years
,
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,
new problems have arisen
as a result
.
This
 essay explains the most serious challenges and suggests possible solutions to them.
Firstly
, the
use
 of the internet has brought an increase in online fraud. Fraudsters can now easily access sensitive information of individuals and organisations and
use
 these to steal from them, causing pain and anger.
Secondly
, there is the problem of depression and ultimately suicide amongst youth.Young people who have low self esteem are easily intimidated by what they watch and read online.
This
sometimes lead
Suggestion
sometimes leads
 to depression and
then
 causes them to take their own lives.A recent study concluded that about 60% of persons who committed suicide
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,
could be traced to their activities online. It is very important that actions be taken to reduce these problems.Individuals can start by making sure they keep their personal details discreet and not save them online. They can
also
 make sure they
use
 them on sites that are well secured. Companies can make sure they have good IT controls in place to help prevent fraud. Parents should be encouraged to be friends with their teens
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,
in
other
(often plural) a command given by a superior (e.g., a military or law enforcement officer) that must be obeyed
order
 to help them understand who they are and direct them in making the right decisions.
This
 will increase their esteem. In conclusion, there will always be problems
as a result
 of the
use
 of the
internet but
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internet, but
 implementing the solutions provided above will help to reduce it and make information more
uself
being of use or service
useful
 to all.

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