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Many people believe that family has greater influence in child life and development as compared to other factors such as friends, tv, music and so on? Do you agree or disagree with the content ?

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It is considered that family
are
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is
 more responsible
to
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for
development
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the development
 of child life than other
such
 as friends,
tv
, music.
However
, I agree with
this
notation but I
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notation, but I
also
 believed friends,
tv
 and musics
is
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also play
are also playing
have also played
also
 play a crucial
role
 in children overall
development
.
In
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On
 one hand, we cannot deny the fact that parents play a significance
role
 in
growth
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the growth
 of children. They are the one who
spend
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spends
 more time with them and teach them how to socialise and respect
to
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for
 other people.
Moreover
, they
also
 motivate them how to struggle with life and guide them in every step of life.
Also
, helps them to be strong physically and mentally by inspiring children in every moment.
However
, despite of parents, friends,
Tv
 and
muscic
an artistic form of auditory communication incorporating instrumental or vocal tones in a structured and continuous manner
music
also
 play a key
role
 to foster
children
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child's
children's
 interpersonal skill to lead them to success.
Firstly
, children learn to be
friendly
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friends
 and socialise
from
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with
 the friends.
In addition
, they get deep knowledge about geography, nature, culture tradition of different countries from all over the world from
tv
 so they learn about the cultural diversity.
For instance
, children living in Nepal can get ideas of different culture and look out the different places of different countries like Australia, India, New Zealand, USA by source of
tv
.
Moreover
, juveniles
also
 get relax and refresh their mind from music which is important to make their mind calm to do any activities like studying
,
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,
 playing sport. They
also
 learn to be independent which helps them to solve the problems and develop the thinking abilities.
Hence
,
tv
 friend and musics
also helps
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also help
 in
intellectual
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the intellectual development
development
 of children. To sum up,
although
 the parents have a
great
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greater
role
 in
development
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the development
 of children
,
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,
only their presence cannot lead child future
bright so
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bright, so
tv
, music and friends are
also
 important for overall
development
 of children.
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