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Some people think that we live in a society where money and possessions are given too much importance. Others believe that his is improving our lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

#people #society #money #possessions #importance #lives
Today's world,
money
 and possessions are considered valuable things in each individual
life
's
,
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,
but some
thinks
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think
 that
this
 only secures our lives. In
this
 essay, I will be discussing both positive and negative aspects and
also
 my opinion with few
example
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examples
.
Firstly
,
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,
we all know that
money
 is regarded as
most important thing
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the most important thing
 in
life
's.
Money
 gives power and helps in maintaining the status in the place where you reside.Now days, for basic needs and for
education we
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education, we
 need
money
. So no doubt
monay
the most common medium of exchange; functions as legal tender
money
 plays an important things in
everyones
life
.
For instance
, school fees
,
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,
 buying groceries, transport for all
this
 we need
money
.
However
, I believe
money
 can help us in getting all materialistic things and that's why it is considered important.But
money
 can't help in building and maintaining relations in society.
Money
 can help in achieving good quality
life but
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life, but
 cannot help in buying human values.
For instance
,
money
 can help us in buying
comfortness but
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comforts, but
comforts but
 it cannot give peace and positivity
.
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.
 To sum up, each individual has his or her own point of view to see the importance of
money
 in
lifes but
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life, but
life but
 it's all on our hand how much
weightage
the product of voltage and current
wattage
 we give to it. In my view
,
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,
money
 is
important but
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important, but
 not everything.
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