In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?.
In certain parts of the United States, teenagers cannot go out after a particular hour of the
night
without the supervision of an adult. In my opinion, Use synonyms
this
is justified because adolescents are too young to keep themselves safe and secure at all times.
Keeping teenagers confined to their homes during the late hours of the Linking Words
night
is beneficial for them. If they go out alone during Use synonyms
this
time, they are more likely to come into contact with criminals and Linking Words
pedophiles
. an adult who is sexually attracted to children
paedophiles
For example
, the drug mafia target new ‘customers’ under the cover of darkness. If teenagers are out Linking Words
alone they
are more likely to fall into Accept comma addition
alone, they
such
traps without realizing the consequences of their actions. They may start using drugs out of curiosity and eventually become Linking Words
addicts
. Sexual predators Suggestion
addicted
also
target children and teenagers who are alone at Linking Words
night
. Young people cannot distinguish between good and bad relationships and may land themselves in trouble by befriending Use synonyms
such
people. Linking Words
Such
situations will not arise if they spend the Linking Words
night
.
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On the other hand
, if teenagers are accompanied by an adult, they are less likely to be approached by criminals. Linking Words
This
protects them from many evils. Linking Words
Also
, the parent or guardian who accompanies the children can keep a tab on their activities and warn them when they cross the limits.
In conclusion, Linking Words
this
‘curfew’ that prevents teens from going out of their home alone at late Linking Words
night
is beneficial for them and protects them from crime and bad company. Since teenagers are too young to understand what is right or wrong, they need the care and protection of an adult when they are in vulnerable circumstances.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite