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Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn the language. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#english #language #country
It is said that the best
way
 to master any
language
, including English, is to learn from the
country
 that uses the
language
 as its national communication tool.
However
, it is not
necessary
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necessarily
 the only
way
 to do it. I
wholingly
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will
willingly
 agree with
this
 statement. It’s pretty obvious how learning English in an English-speaking
country
 is the fastest and most efficient
way
. Not only have you the opportunity to practice and improve your speaking skills all the time, but you can
also
 obtain knowledge of the culture to
further
 enhance your understanding of the
language
 itself. After all,
language
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the language
 is heavily affected by the history and culture.
In contrast
 to that, reality has proven that it is not the only
way
. General examples are the doctors and
proffesors
the highest ranking position for a university academic
professors
professor
 who
has mastered
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have mastered
 English to a great extent that surpasses most of those who lived in England for quite a long time. Or students who
has
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have
 English as
an
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a
 compulsory subject at school since elementary grade can
also
 speak English fluently as if it was their mother tongue.
Moreover
, learning English in an English-speaking
country
 mean you have to leave your homeland to live abroad if you weren’t born as a member of one of those
country
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countries
 from the beginning. And doing so forces you to leave your family, to adapt
with
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to
 the new, strange and somewhat scary environment that you have yet to
dealt
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deal
 with in your life while enduring the terrible effect of homesick.
That is
 only if you have enough luck or money to even move to another
country
 since making visa, booking flights and living in English-speaking countries, which are very modern and rich countries can cause you thousands of
dollar
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dollars
 a year, which isn’t something most people can afford for
language
 learning
purpose
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purposes
.

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  • immersion
  • fluency
  • advanced
  • communicate
  • accommodate
  • exposure
  • cultural understanding
  • native speakers
  • educational institutions
  • resources
  • diverse
  • globalized
  • interact
  • self-study
  • online courses
  • tutors
  • language exchange
  • books
  • videos
  • podcasts
  • language proficiency
  • language barrier
  • conversation partners
  • progress
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