Some people say that in all level of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

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a fact

that

student’s schedule

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the student’s schedule

from primary education to higher education are unbalanced partition between pick up

theory

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knowledge and training practical ability. In my point of view, I suppose that both

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parts

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are

essential for student’s learning and should have an equal time in

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a student’s schedule

the student’s schedule

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, in some underprivileged countries, scholars barely get the opportunity for practical training, which required attentive student management and costly equipment.

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, the cramped government capital is not used for facility investment and training skilled pedagogical trainers.

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, many teachers in rural area just have one sample to perform for students observe and almost students are not allowed to touch

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sample.

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, almost examination is on paper so scholars and educators consider

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lessons are

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more serious

than practical one.

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training skills, the scholar

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trains

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students

by doing exercise on paper.

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just makes

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students develop calculate skill and they can stimulate what they need to do when meet problems.

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, when applying to a factory the graduated engineer not only discovering

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problems, but

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solving these problems in reality and they need numerous practical skills to adapt

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business requirement.

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, explaining

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in class is simpler than instructing practical skills so

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educationally

prefer teaching

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despite the

efficient

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efficiency

of practical training. When students practice they

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doesn't only approach

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through 2 senses, sight and hearing, but

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2 other senses, smell and touch,

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boost the remembering ability because all of these information are linked together and student can recall smoothly in the future. In conclusion, learning facts and practical skills are both essential for students’ learning and the time spend for both should arrange harmoniously.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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Relevant & specific examples

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4 paragraphs

280 words

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Some people say that in all level of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

Some educationalists think that international exchange visits will benefit teenagers at the school. • To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

I didn't have any nightmare travel experiences, but my friend has had such an experience.

Nowadays, people prefer buying new items rather than repairing the damaged ones. What are the causes of this change ? what are its effects?

People should only buy food sourced locally. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?