Some people say that in all level of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

It is
fact
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a fact
that
student’s schedule
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the student’s schedule
from primary education to higher education are unbalanced partition between pick up
theory
knowledge and training practical ability. In my point of view, I suppose that both
part
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parts
is
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are
essential for student’s learning and should have an equal time in
student’s schedule
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a student’s schedule
the student’s schedule
.
Firstly
, in some underprivileged countries, scholars barely get the opportunity for practical training, which required attentive student management and costly equipment.
Nonetheless
, the cramped government capital is not used for facility investment and training skilled pedagogical trainers.
For instance
, many teachers in rural area just have one sample to perform for students observe and almost students are not allowed to touch
this
sample.
Secondly
, almost examination is on paper so scholars and educators consider
theory
lessons are
more seriously
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more serious
than practical one.
Instead
training skills, the scholar
train
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trains
their
student
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students
by doing exercise on paper.
This
just make
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just makes
is just making
students develop calculate skill and they can stimulate what they need to do when meet problems.
For example
, when applying to a factory the graduated engineer not only discovering
problems but
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problems, but
also
solving these problems in reality and they need numerous practical skills to adapt
this
business requirement.
Thirdly
, explaining
theory
in class is simpler than instructing practical skills so
educator
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educationally
prefer teaching
theory
despite the
efficient
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efficiency
of practical training. When students practice they
not only approach
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doesn't only approach
aren't only approaching
through 2 senses, sight and hearing, but
also
2 other senses, smell and touch,
this
boost the remembering ability because all of these information are linked together and student can recall smoothly in the future. In conclusion, learning facts and practical skills are both essential for students’ learning and the time spend for both should arrange harmoniously.
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