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Do you agree or disagree? Reading fiction (such as novels and short stories) is more enjoyable than watching movies.

#fiction #novels #stories #movies
It is common to believe that
although
 motion pictures are a good source of entertainment, reading
fiction
 books like short stories and novels are more fun to read.
This
 essay will discuss, how
fiction
 stories are far better than movies. To commence with, people can travel to the new imaginary world in their minds to create stories while reading
fiction
 books. In these books, almost all the stories are related to the imaginary things, and when people read these books, they start making the pictures in their minds related to the story, which fascinates them to read more and get more knowledge about it. To illustrate, in India, a survey found that children who read
fiction
 books have more creativity level than other children who do not read
this
 kind of stories.
Hence
, reading
fiction
 books not only increase the level of imagination in people, but
also
 make them more creative in their life.
Furthermore
,
fiction
 reading is the best way to make the habit of reading books. The authors present their ideas or stories in a creative as well as the systematic way that if someone starts reading these books once, it is hard to break link unless they finish the whole book. These books, play a very crucial part while making a reading habit, not only in children, but people from all age groups can take advantage of it.
For instance
, nowadays, so many countries have started to adopt that idea to give their children some sort of
fiction
 books, so that they can take an interest in the reading books from the early age, because they know that habits make in
this
 age hard to die, and it will certainly benefit from them in the future. So, these books work like glue between people and their reading habits. To recapitulate, no doubt that motion pictures are very famous in people, but the pleasant, which is provided by the books, is beyond the expectations.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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