Climate change is the biggest thread to life on our planet. How accurate is this statement? Are there any other big threats to mankind?

It is claimed that global warming is the chief
threat
to human civilization.
This
essay does not agree with
this
statement because people can find technological solutions to
this
problem whereas
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problem, whereas
the
threat
from nuclear weapons cannot be so easily solved and
therefore
poses a
graver
dignified and somber in manner or character and committed to keeping promises
grave
threat
. Some would argue that the increase of the planet’s average temperature will lead to catastrophe on a global scale,
however
, the technology already exists to stem
this
threat
. Solar power, combined with the use of electric vehicles, will remove the need for fossil-
fueled
heated, driven, or produced by burning fuel
fuelled
power stations and transportation. The result will be a massive reduction in the release of greenhouse gases into the earth’s atmosphere; the principal cause of global warming.
For example
, Tesla Motors
produces
Suggestion
produce
excellent cars that produce zero CO2 and its sister company, Solar City,
allows
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allow
people to produce their own electricity using innovative
photovoltaic
roof tiles and Power Wall battery packs. A much larger danger is that of
thermo-nuclear
using nuclear weapons based on fusion as distinguished from fission
thermonuclear
war. It would only take one blunder or the
break out
an escape from jail
breakout
of a major war between nuclear states to wipe out every living thing on earth.
This
would be caused by the explosions themselves and the ensuing nuclear
winter which
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winter, which
would wipe out all plant life and poison the air and oceans.
For instance
, the United States of America alone has enough nuclear warheads to wipe out every man, woman and child on earth with its arsenal and the Cuban Missile Crisis in the 1960s demonstrated how close it is possible to come to global nuclear war. In conclusion, climate change is not the gravest peril the earth faces because we have the technological capability to solve it and the
threat
from
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of
nuclear arms is much greater.

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