Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in a group, while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Many people are of the opinion that group

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is a better way for students to learn, whereas, some think that it is more beneficial to read in isolation. The essay below will discuss on both sides of the statement, as I will

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highlight my personal view on the topic.

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, to attain a

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goal is something

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very challenging. Unless one is ready to be fully dedicated to studying, and avoid unnecessary distractions like parties and hangouts, it will never be achieved.

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can be better handled when it is a personal decision that does not involve managing other people's choice about it.

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, a joint reading target might not be met just because, some members decide to have fun rather than sticking to the plan.

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can be very difficult to cope with.

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, coming together to learn and discuss by different individuals can be very helpful when all the parties involve are ready to give their best. During a collective lesson, people learn new ideas from others.

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, some faults or mistakes are corrected since it opens up an avenue for criticism and by so doing, a better result will be seen. A good example is a popular Scientist who was not able to pull through with his invention until he invited a few friends to his research who helped him to amend his wrongs and

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brought in new ideas, which made it a success. If he didn't allow his colleagues in his work, maybe the project will still not be recorded as a successful one today. In conclusion, there are positive aspects to both a group

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and

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a personal

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as analysed in the essay.

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, both sides have good argumentative points, I am very convinced that a group way of learning is still a better approach.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

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Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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4 paragraphs

311 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

collaborative learning
peer feedback
social interaction
deep understanding
group dynamics
personalized learning
self-discipline
concentration
diverse perspectives
isolation
motivation
peer support
groupthink
distractions
commitment

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