Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I partially agree with the statement, for better academic performance
,
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Discipline in studies is very important for better education
,
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getting things done in a rightful way, teaches them about being obedient,
therefore
spanking a child may seem only helpful in
shot
the location on a baseball field where the shortstop is stationed
short
term. Some children are very sturborn and only does things in order to hurt someone else intentionally without realising that the other person can get injured or what the results can be at the end, so thats where the parents and teaches should stand out for their actions,
bit
of smacking in a light way or scolding them
bit
of harshly during that certain age can lead to better outcome in future as when they are not studying or not taking things seriously like focusing only in their friends and activities like social sites , playing games going out side of houses to roam around in cities with firends, all these only shows that the child is not aware or doesnt care about anything which is right, he is not scared of doing things wrong and not showing respect to their parents by doing the task giving at home, Masters from school giving homework or assignment, despite telling them numberous time i think thats where a
bit
of action should be taken in order for a daughter and son or a student to bring them in a right path so that developing a
bit
of scared in their heart can lead them to good life when they grow up. To conclude, When a baby is born it brings
joys
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joy
and unconditional happiness in a
womens
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Womens
women
women's
and
mens
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Mens
lifes
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
,
its
it is
it's
a blessing from god,
however it
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however, it
also
comes with huge
responsibilites
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibilities
like taking care of their needs and wants at every certain
ages
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age
as it changes, when a child
starting growing
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starting, growing
we should start
deciliplining
a branch of knowledge
disciplining
them, showing not just by words but applying all these in good
charactics
an imaginary person represented in a work of fiction (play or film or story)
character
characters
in yourself
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most of them learn by the
surroudings
the environmental condition
surroundings
as how it is.
showing
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Showing
respect and being
obedients
dutifully complying with the commands or instructions of those in authority
obedient
, being friendly to people can educate your own children a
good
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better
person while time is rising.
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