Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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I partially agree with the statement, for better academic performance

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Discipline in studies is very important for better education

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getting things done in a rightful way, teaches them about being obedient,

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spanking a child may seem only helpful in

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the location on a baseball field where the shortstop is stationed

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term. Some children are very sturborn and only does things in order to hurt someone else intentionally without realising that the other person can get injured or what the results can be at the end, so thats where the parents and teaches should stand out for their actions,

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of smacking in a light way or scolding them

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of harshly during that certain age can lead to better outcome in future as when they are not studying or not taking things seriously like focusing only in their friends and activities like social sites , playing games going out side of houses to roam around in cities with firends, all these only shows that the child is not aware or doesnt care about anything which is right, he is not scared of doing things wrong and not showing respect to their parents by doing the task giving at home, Masters from school giving homework or assignment, despite telling them numberous time i think thats where a

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of action should be taken in order for a daughter and son or a student to bring them in a right path so that developing a

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of scared in their heart can lead them to good life when they grow up. To conclude, When a baby is born it brings

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joy

and unconditional happiness in a

womens

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Womens

women

women's

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Mens

lifes

a characteristic state or mode of living

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comes with huge

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the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force

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like taking care of their needs and wants at every certain

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age

as it changes, when a child

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starting, growing

we should start

deciliplining

a branch of knowledge

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them, showing not just by words but applying all these in good

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an imaginary person represented in a work of fiction (play or film or story)

character

characters

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most of them learn by the

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the environmental condition

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as how it is.

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Showing

respect and being

obedients

dutifully complying with the commands or instructions of those in authority

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, being friendly to people can educate your own children a

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better

person while time is rising.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restriction on what they do to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people think it is better for one single legal system throughout the world. Others say countries should have their own laws. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people asser that it is good for college students to have part-time jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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