These days, in many countries fewer and fewer people, want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

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letter to highlight the few points you asked me to come up with in regards to improving our

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area, which has been receiving a lot of flak recently.

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, there has been a lot of complaints from our visitors because of the old, untidy and fractured

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, which includes our guest seating area. There have been specific complaints about the sofa set being dirty and

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about some foul smell coming from it. As

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area is the

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point of contact for our clients and visitors, it is imperative, that we should take our visitor's concerns seriously, since it can have a negative impact on our company's image.

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, I would like to put forward an idea of refurbishing our

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with new furniture.

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desk. Please let me know what you think about the idea. Regards Jack

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Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

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Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

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These days, in many countries fewer and fewer people, want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

Fully explain your ideas

Nowadays a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctors. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Some people argue that historic buildings should be preserved in their original form. Others argue that this is both inadvisable and impossible. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

As the world becomes technologically advanced, computers are replacing more and more jobs. Describe some job positions that may be lost because of computers, and discuss at least one problem that may result.

Some people think that men and women have different qualities, therefore certain jobs suitable for men and others for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?