Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own opinion.

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Over the
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the pace of
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in the life of human beings has increased beyond our wildest expectations.
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has been driven by technological and scientific breakthroughs that are changing the whole way we view the world on an almost daily basis.
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means that
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is not always a personal option, but an inescapable fact of life, and we need to constantly adapt to keep pace with it. Those
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who believe they have achieved some security by doing the same, familiar things are living in denial. Even when
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believe they are resisting
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themselves, they cannot stop the world around them from changing. Sooner or later they will find that the familiar jobs no longer exist, or that the ‘safe’ patterns of behaviour are no longer appropriate.
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, reaching the conclusion that
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is inevitable is not the same as assuming that ‘
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is always for the better’. Unfortunately, it is not always the case that new things are promoted because they have good impacts
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the majority of
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. A lot of innovations are made with the aim of making money for a few.
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is because it is the rich and powerful
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in our society who are able to impose changes (
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as in working conditions or property developments) that are in their own interests. In conclusion, I would say that
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can be stimulating and energising for individuals when they pursue it themselves, but that all
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, including that which is imposed on
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, does not necessarily have good outcomes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • stagnation
  • routine
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • specialization
  • innate
  • personal growth
  • adaptability
  • fast-paced
  • new horizons
  • equilibrium
  • progress
  • dynamic
  • transformation
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