Lectures were the traditional way to teach large numbers of students in the past. Now new technology is being used to teach students. Is this positive or a negative development.

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has become a method of educating students. Prior to to
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provides students opportunities for interaction and tools for effective lesson
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provides
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the chance to meet with their course mates and
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can be very helpful in their studies.
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, during my preparation for IELTS, I enrolled in a class that had a very active online forum. Anytime there was a class, the tutor comes online to teach and
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really helped us to discuss ideas and solve problems. As
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sort of instant interaction is impossible under a traditional educational setup. It is clear that
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brings many positive elements to education.
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renders
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with stronger tools for
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, when I was to write a professional examination, all of its lectures and videos were uploaded for each class. I only had to click on each section of the lecture for reviews. Traditionally,
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would not have been possible, and
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the merits of having
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as a part of the educational experience can be seen. Conclusively, having seen how
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students opportunities for interaction and effective
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. It is clear that it brings a lot to the
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as the speed by which students are able to absorb information is expected to continue to accelerate with the aid of
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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