In some countries quality of life in larger cities is decling. Why do you think is happening and what measurebcan be taken?

It is believed the living standards of people is
degradating
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degrading
degradation
day by day in some countries which have large cities.
This
essay will discuss reasons
of
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for
this types
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this type
these types
of
problem
and
also
discuss on
method
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a method
which need to
carried
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carry
out by
government
and people to tackle
this
problem
. To commence with, quality of
life
of individual in some
countries cities
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countries, cities
such
as Delhi,
kathmandu
the capital and largest city of Nepal
Kathmandu
, Lahore and so on is
decling
grow worse
declining
dealing
decline
due to increase
number
of population.
Firstly
, traffic congestion is becoming
major
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a major problem
problem
due to
rapid increase
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the rapid increase number
a rapid increase number
number
of public with
plummeted
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plummeting
private vehicles. Not only
this
, because of more
number
of
vehicles
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vehicle
environment is being polluted which has
direct impact
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a direct impact
on human
life styles
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyles
. For
instances
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instance
, vehicles
produces
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produce
large emission of exhaust fumes and pollute the air.
Secondly
, increase urbanisation has become key factor which has
detrimental effect
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a detrimental effect
detrimental effects
on healthy
life
of
public
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the public
. Recent research showed that due to urbanisation waste product from each house is increasing which are polluting water, land as well as air. Because of
this
people are deprived of healthy
life
and becoming trigger in higher quality of livelihood.
Hence
, traffic congestion and. Urbanisation
should be improve
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should improve
for making better living standards of people. In other hand, governments and individual themselves should play a crucial role to solve the
problem
.
Firstly
, to control traffic congestion
government
should
emphasised
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emphasise
on
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in
the development of public transport so
vehicles
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the vehicles' number
vehicles' number
number
will controlled.
Similarly
, they should manage waste product management system for effective disposal of waste from each house.
In addition
,
government
should migrate people of crowded places to free space area. Even though
government
trying their
best sometimes it
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best, sometimes it
fails due to strong legislation so legislation should be
improve
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improved
improving
.
Secondly
,
peopl
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the people
people
themselves must be aware of
effect
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the effect
of
polluted environment
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the polluted environment
and indulged in
government programme
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the government programme
government programmes
to save healthy environment.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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