Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

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belive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

believed

that, it is crucial to keep

home

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and

office

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businesslike

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straight

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fully organised, and everything are tidy-kept.

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with, nowadays it is most important to keep

office

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and

home

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well maintained.

when

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When

people come to

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office

Suggestion

the office

they want to do

work

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with

fresh mind

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a fresh mind

and fresh and fresh environment.

when

Suggestion

When

their

office

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sitting area, parking area

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canteen,

labrotary

a workplace for the conduct of scientific research

laboratory

are well maintained, and every needed things are in exact

place

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then

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employee

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feel rejuvenate.

Suggestion

will be beneficial, if everything is user-friendly.

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also

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fruitful for employer

also

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.If

every thing

all things

everything

is well maintained it decrease

work

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stress,

moreover

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employee

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focus on their main

work

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rather than finding something which

are kept

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is kept

any where

at or in or to any place

anywhere

when

Suggestion

When

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office

Suggestion

the office

is well organised and separates each and every section,

then

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employee

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find

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finds

proper object

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the proper object

a proper object

in proper

place

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moreover it

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Moreover, it

Moreover it

great habit of all

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employee

Suggestion

employees

and

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

worker to put everything in its proper

place

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when

Suggestion

When

all sections are mix-up

then

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it is so confusing for

employee

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and they did not focus on their

work

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they completely go

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into

stress.

they

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They

could not find anything interesting. The

second

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part of the discussion is

home

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also

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beneficial to

kept

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keep

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home

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homes

clean

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well maintained.

when

Suggestion

When

everything is fully organised

then

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it is interesting to the

home

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members.

when

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When

kitchen area

are

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messy or some other objects

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utensils are found here and there it feels so stressful.

when

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When

we give everything have special

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place

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place, then

then

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we need not to search something all over the

home

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Suggestion

found things in

proper

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the proper place

place

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moreover it

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moreover, it

increase the working speed.

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decrease

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decreases

level

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the level

of embarrassment to find something.

when

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When

our

home

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is decorated and well

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is well decorated and

maintained

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then

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it is not only looks beautiful but

also

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feels refreshing every time. To recapitulate my opinion is

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it is necessary to

kept

Suggestion

keep

home

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and

work

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place

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tidy

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well maintained, because it is vital to save time

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decrease

Suggestion

decreases

stress and increase level of happiness to doing

office

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work

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home

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chores.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

326 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

organised
clutter-free
productivity
mental clarity
efficiency
professionalism
first impressions
ergonomics
aesthetically pleasing
compulsive neatness
functional space
minimising distractions
systematic arrangement
time management
work-life balance
streamline
feng shui
optimal performance

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