Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

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belive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

believed

that, it is crucial to keep

home

and

office

businesslike

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straight

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fully organised, and everything are tidy-kept.

To begin

with, nowadays it is most important to keep

office

and

home

well maintained.

when

Suggestion

When

people come to

office

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the office

they want to do

work

with

fresh mind

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a fresh mind

and fresh and fresh environment.

when

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When

their

office

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sitting area, parking area

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canteen,

labrotary

a workplace for the conduct of scientific research

laboratory

are well maintained, and every needed things are in exact

place

then

employee

feel rejuvenate.

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will be beneficial, if everything is user-friendly.

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also

fruitful for employer

also

.If

every thing

all things

everything

is well maintained it decrease

work

stress,

moreover

employee

focus on their main

work

rather than finding something which

are kept

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is kept

any where

at or in or to any place

anywhere

when

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When

office

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the office

is well organised and separates each and every section,

then

employee

find

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finds

proper object

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the proper object

a proper object

in proper

place

moreover it

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Moreover, it

Moreover it

great habit of all

employee

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employees

and

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

worker to put everything in its proper

place

when

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When

all sections are mix-up

then

it is so confusing for

employee

and they did not focus on their

work

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they completely go

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into

stress.

they

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They

could not find anything interesting. The

second

part of the discussion is

home

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also

beneficial to

kept

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keep

home

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homes

clean

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well maintained.

when

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When

everything is fully organised

then

it is interesting to the

home

members.

when

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When

kitchen area

are

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messy or some other objects

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utensils are found here and there it feels so stressful.

when

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When

we give everything have special

place

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place, then

then

we need not to search something all over the

home

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found things in

proper

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the proper place

place

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moreover it

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moreover, it

increase the working speed.

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decrease

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decreases

level

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the level

of embarrassment to find something.

when

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When

our

home

is decorated and well

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is well decorated and

maintained

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then

it is not only looks beautiful but

also

feels refreshing every time. To recapitulate my opinion is

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it is necessary to

kept

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keep

home

and

work

place

tidy

Accept space

well maintained, because it is vital to save time

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decrease

Suggestion

decreases

stress and increase level of happiness to doing

office

work

home

chores.

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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.