The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart compares the percentage of male and female teachers in different educational settings from nursery school to university. Significant differences between
men
and women are evident.
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men
at the college level. However
, a smaller proportion of women held teaching positions at training institutes, and, at universities, female lecturers were outnumbered by males by roughly two to one.
For men
, the pattern of employment was the reverse. Only 2 percent
of nursery school teachers and 10 Change the spelling
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percent
of primary teachers were Change the spelling
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men
. They were more equally represented at secondary
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However
, a significantly higher percentage of university lecturers were male (roughly 70 percent
).
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Overall
, the figure shows that gender is a significant factor in patterns of employment within the education sector.Submitted by jockeydj on
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