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: In many countries,there are an increasing number of private cars .what are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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Nowadays
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The number of cars
have increased
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has increased
had increased
 at an unprecedented rate.
many
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Many
 people think that
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it is most beneficial to have an own
car
.
However
, there are both pros and cons to
deciding
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decide
to
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on
this
.In
this
 essay
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I will discuss some of the reasons why the use of private
car
 is
increase
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increasing
 and some of the challenges created by
this
. One of the main positives of having a
car
 is
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it is more convenient transport type.What I mean by
this
 is that people go anywhere
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where they would like to go.
people
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People
 who have its own
car
 they would use it for many purposes at any time when they want.
For instance
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when we decide to go for family trip
then
 we need not to book any public transport or other types of transportation or waiting for it.
it
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It
 can make you independent.
having private
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Having a private
Having private
car
 is so crucial when some
unforseen
not anticipated
unforeseen
 emergency situation occurred.
secondly
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Secondly
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when most of the people purchase
cars
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cars, then
then
 it
automatically
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automatically increases
increase
 the production of cars.
it
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It
 is very fruitful to create a job in automobile industries.Take an example of
developed country
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a developed country
developed countries
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there are many
jobs
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job
 options are created in automobile industries and
also
 having a
car
 is a status symbol. Turning to the other side of the argument private
car
create
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creates
 more traffic
congesion
excessive accumulation of blood or other fluid in a body part
congestion
.To be more precise urban areas
are
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is
 full of cars in rush hour.
Lets
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Let's
 use city Mumbai as an example.The rate of accident is
increase
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increased
increasing
 there just because of problem created by traffic. Another issue is that private cars
increase
 air and noise pollution in
urban area
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urban areas
an urban area
.In other word
this
 vehicle emit dangerous gases
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,
it
affect
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affects
 the quality of air,
Moreover
 the quality of air is deteriorating.And
also
 people face respiratory related health issues
such
 as asthma. All things considered
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In todays modern era everyone
want
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wants
 to have private vehicle
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,
but it
also have
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also has
 some disadvantages related to health.Personally
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I believe that it is vital to having a own vehicle for people live's and economic impact.
However
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we must know when and how much we use the
car
 so that we can minimise the demerits.
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