One of your friends in a foreign country is starting an import-export business, and he has asked you to recommend a product from your country to him. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, -Say what product you want to recommend to him -Tell him/her where he/she can get this product -Explain why you want to recommend this producT

Dear Ninad, I’m writing to provide suggestions for the type of
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you should choose to import into Canada. I would like to recommend special spices from India. The huge Indian community in Canada can be the potential customer for
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a niche
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. The lack of Indian grocery stores
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as an opportunity to advertise and sell to Indian customers. To acquire
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product
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product,
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you can get in touch with the spice distributor in the state of Gujarat in India. The distributor is called MDH and can easily be reached through their website or by contacting their office
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phone. They are open every day from 9AM to 5PM IST. They offer delivery services around the world and can deliver straight to your store in Canada
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at an affordable rate. The reason I’m recommending
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product
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is
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it offers high margins for profit and is easy to store
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long-term
. Each packet is sealed and has a long shelf life of up to 3 years.
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reducing the variable cost of your business. I look forward to hearing from you and wishing you the best of luck. Warm regards, Jasmeet

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Task response: Add one more clear reason why this product is good for Canada.
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Task response: Use a more exact place or company detail to make your idea stronger.
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Coherence and cohesion: Check small grammar parts like subject and verb, for example 'stores act' not 'stores acts'.
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Coherence and cohesion: Link ideas with simple words like 'also', 'so', and 'because' to make the flow smoother.
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Task response: You answer all parts of the letter clearly.
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Task response: The tone is friendly and fits a letter to a friend.
coherence and cohesion
Coherence and cohesion: The letter has a clear start, middle, and end.
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Coherence and cohesion: Each paragraph mostly has one main idea.
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