are these shows a good method of finding talented people, or are they just entertainment?

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Nowadays, many
television
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programs are searching for talented people and the programs have been famous in many communities. Lots of human beings believe that the shows are a better way of looking for talented people, whereas some think that they just entertain the society.
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essay will discuss both points of view. With regard to the talented show programs, most
man kinds
all of the living human inhabitants of the earth
mankinds
main kinds
think that it is a good method of searching gifted individuals, because sometimes the programs take the candidate from street singers and musicians. The program can dignify many street performers and make them popular.
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, a boy band from America, One Direction, has become popular in many societies in the world from X-Factor which one of the talented show program in America.
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, many believe that they just entertain mankind and profitably the
television
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.
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, when the
television
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perform
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performs
the talented shows, the
television
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will perform many advertisements on its program. So I think, the inhabitants are just an object of
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television's commercial
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the television commercial
television commercial
a television commercial
television commercials
.
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, another reason why it just for entertaining people, most of the talented shows do not include an education for adult or children, they just focus on their rating and profit, but they ignore the precious value for persons. In my view, it is useless for human beings. To sum up,
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some people argue that televised talent shows are a good method of finding talented people, I would argue they are just entertainment programs and there is no precious and educational value for communities and children. I think the programs just to commerce for TV stations.

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