Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre explain why the centre is important for the local community describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes

#council #sports #leisure #centre #money #friends #community #effects #people

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Rober Smith and I am one the member of your local community who lives in

Lawarnce

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Lawrence

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floor 7. I am writing

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letter

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regarding

to reconsider your decision of closing one and only

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center

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that we have at Younge street. As you're aware of the fact that we are

community

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of over 10

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thousand

people and we only

this

center

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for our recreational and creative

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activities

. I and my son always go for a walk in

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time and

also

use a swimming pool to keep

ourselves

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fit. Most of the

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children

are playing soccer, cricket

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every evening. Along with

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these

centre

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organize many

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helpful

seminars for children as well as for adults. If the

center

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will shut down

then

local people definitely feel

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left out as they don't have any near place where they can

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utilise

their free time.

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is not acceptable at all. If cutting the cost is the problem

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I am sure we can reconcile to other alternatives. Everyone from

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community

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agains

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against

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decision. Please reconsider the decision of closing that centre. Yours Faithfully, Robert Smith

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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21Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

196 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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