Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre explain why the centre is important for the local community describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Rober Smith and I am one the member of your local community who lives in

Lawarnce

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Lawrence

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floor 7. I am writing

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letter

regarrding

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regarding

to reconsider your decision of closing one and only

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center

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that we have at Younge street. As you're aware of the fact that we are

community

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of over 10

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thousand

people and we only

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center

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for our recreational and creative

activites

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activities

. I and my son always go for a walk in

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time and

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use a swimming pool to keep

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fit. Most of the

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children

are playing soccer, cricket

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every evening. Along with

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these

centre

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organize many

helpfull

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helpful

seminars for children as well as for adults. If the

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will shut down

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local people definitely feel

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left out as they don't have any near place where they can

utilies

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utilise

their free time.

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is not acceptable at all. If cutting the cost is the problem

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I am sure we can reconcile to other alternatives. Everyone from

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community

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agains

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decision. Please reconsider the decision of closing that centre. Yours Faithfully, Robert Smith

meteMon Aug 26 2019

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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7 paragraphs

196 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

leisure centre
foster social bonds
physical health
mental well-being
constructive activities
accessible
exercise
community spirit
public service
anti-social behavior
cost-saving measures
vital role
recreation
negative impact
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