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Many newspapers and magazines feature stories about private lives of famous people. We know what they eat, where they buy their clothes and they love. we also often see pictures of them in private situations. Is it appropriate for a magazine or newspaper to give this kind of private information about people?

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Newspapers are the source of information for people and updates about current
affairs but
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affairs, but
 nowadays it becomes a room for
personal lives
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the personal lives
 of celebrities. In
mu
of me or myself
my
 perspective,
newspaper
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a newspaper
 is not a good place to publish
such
 news.
However
, magazines are meant for
entertainment so
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entertainment, so
 it can be advertised there. There are several reasons for not to publish about other people's personal lives in newspapers as it doesn't show any facts or reality.
For instance
, Sonam
kapoor
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Kapoor
 is getting married to
sportsman
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the sportsman
 is not an important news that it should be on newsletters.
Moreover
, if news regarding famous personalities
should be publish
Suggestion
should publish
 it must be related to social events or public interests like Sonam Kapoor helps women to empower by motivating them choose their career. Magazines,
on the other hand
, focus on social news.It is more acceptable by readers to publish about stars as it will excel their career and provide them publicity.
Furthermore
, I believe that
rumors
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the rumours
rumours
 about untrue events or
embarrasing
hard to deal with; especially causing pain or embarrassment
embarrassing
 moments should not be published
on
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in
 any social media as it put negative
affects
property of a personal character that is portable but not used in business
effects
 on
public
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the public
. In conclusion, information that has some meaning and informative
to
being one more than one
two
 news readers must be prepared to put in front of
audience
Suggestion
an audience
the audience
audiences
. The content should be on the main purpose and basics of publishing newspaper.
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