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A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similiar problem in the past. Write a reply to your friend. In your letter > Tell your friend you understand the problem. > explain what happened to you in the past. > suggest possible solution to the problem.

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Dear Prasad, How are you? I am fine. Hope everything is going well with you. I hope Tina's education is going well. I have just received your letter about the
problem
 that you are facing in your
work
. I would like you to tell that not to worry about the issue and I want you to take proper care of your health as you are suffering from asthma. I want to let you know that for every
problem
 there will be a solution which we can deal with if we think better. Even I have faced the same
problem
 with my team leader.
Although
, I am the one who used to perform well at
work
, my boss used to question me for everything.
Initially
, I thought the
problem
 will get solved, but as days passing it became problematic and I used to feel very bad which led me into so many problems, where I cannot perform well at my
work
. I have
also
 got many health related issues and later one of my colleague who is a well-wisher suggested me with some solution which helped me to overcome the
problem
.
Firstly
, I want you to be in a good mood and
then
 speak with your team leader that you need his time, may be like after office hours.
Then
 offer him a coffee and
then
 you let him know about the interest and passion that you are having towards
work
. Make him clearly understood the
problem
 that you are having and tell him that you would like to have a good and smooth relationship with him and other colleagues.
Furthermore
, make him know that you want a friendly atmosphere at your workplace by which you can excel at your
work
. I will look forward to hearing from you in the near future. Yours Lovingly, Maha
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