The bar chart compares the total amount of 3 main exports from Southland's namely international tourism, dairy and meat products in the years 2000, 2019 and in the projected year in 2025. Units are measured in billions.

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The bar chart compares the total amount of 3 main exports from

Southland's

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namely international tourism, dairy and meat products in the years 2000, 2019 and

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projected year in 2025. Units are measured in billions.

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the exports of tourism and dairy goods

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expected to be higher in 2030, meat products will decrease.

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the chart, we can see that the amount of international tourism in Southland grew from 8 billion in 2000 to 9 billion in 2019 and is projected to climb to 10 BM in 2025.

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, the export of dairy items was 7 BM in the first year (2000), and

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went up to 10 BM in the current year but is forecasted to decline minimally to about 9.5 by 2025.

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, the exportation of meat goods was the least in Southland. From 6 in 2000, it

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dropped to about 5.5

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present

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predicted to decrease to 5 by 2025.

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The bar chart compares the total amount of 3 main exports from Southland's namely international tourism, dairy and meat products in the years 2000, 2019 and in the projected year in 2025. Units are measured in billions.

Some people believe that it is responsibility of individual to take care of their own health and diet. Others however believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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Today more and more people are using mobile phone and computer. Thus, the communication ability is losing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some claim newspapers are the best means to get the most recent information because they have more influence than other forms of media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?