Some people think art such as sculpture and music cannot improve quality of people’s lives so the government should not spend money on them but on health and defense. What is your opinion?

Many believe that fields related to arts

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as

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and sculptures cannot bring about improvement in our lives, whereas people’s lives could be much improved if the governing bodies allocate more budgets to

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and

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defense

(military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies

defence

department of the country. Subjectively, I am inclined to firmly conquer by

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assertion that

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and

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defense

(military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies

defence

are way more important for the quality life rather than having good state of

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art

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the art

.

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easy

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easement

will shed light upon the

imperativeness

requiring attention or action

imperatives

of the

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and

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defense

(military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies

defence

for public prosperity with supporting arguments.

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, I believe due to the fruitful benefits of good

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of

population

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the population

, state must prioritize the impoverishment of

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facilities as the good

labor

a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages

labour

force is an important parameter in

country’s GDP

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the country’s GDP

.

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the government must consider providing subsidized

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facilities to its public, so that healthy population can be grown.

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, the

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is a luxury item in my opinion, anyone who needs to entertain themselves they can always go and listen to the paid

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.

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facility is not useful for

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everybody, thus

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the government can be little worried to expand arts to all.

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, nearly all countries are at stake of instability and terrorism,

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it is direly required that governing bodies must consider providing

the safe

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the safest

environment for its residents.

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can only be possible until the budget for security and

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defense

(military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies

defence

weapons is ensured.

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, the

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also

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plays a role in shaping the society, yet I believe that if the society is not secure the

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can never

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longer

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long

. To summarize the above mentioned, I am predisposed to argue that

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the importance

of the heath and

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defense

(military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies

defence

is eclipsed by the

art

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and

music

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,

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the government should promote

health

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and

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defense

(military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies

defence

more than of

art

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or

music

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.