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In some countries people are no longer allowed to smoke in any public olaces and office building. Do you know think is a good rule or bad?

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Smokings
is prohibited
Suggestion
are prohibited
 in many
natios
a politically organized body of people under a single government
nations
notes
 openly in public places as well as office buildings because it has
bad effect
Suggestion
a bad effect
 on society. I think
this
 is
good rule
Suggestion
a good rule
 for everyone.
Firstly
, it leads to several diseases
such
 as lung cancer.
Secondly negative
Accept comma addition
Secondly, negative
 effect on youngster's mind
To begin
 with, banned smoking in public places
amd
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
office building
Suggestion
the office building
office buildings
 is
good law
Suggestion
a good law
 because through
this
 rule people can protect from diseases which is associated with smoking
such
 as lung cancer.
For example
, in
shimla
Suggestion
Shimla
,
government
Suggestion
the government
 has banned smoking in
this
 area and
there
of them or themselves
their
cances
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
chances
chances'
 of spreading lung cancer rate
also
 decreases.
Hence
,
its
it is
it's
 good for society to protect
form
a giver or sender
from
 dangerous diseases.
Furthermore
, open smoking
give
Suggestion
gives
 the negative message to youngsters because
un
to or toward the inside of
in
this
 age they
eaaily
with ease ('easy' is sometimes used informally for 'easily')
easily
 coping their elders and
then
 they try to imitate people. When they see them doing Smoking
on
Suggestion
in
 public places. In homes, they try to make cigarettes with papers which indulge themselves in smoking..
Thus
, banned smoking helps to protect the youngsters from these bad habits In conclusion, smoking is injurious to health. So, prohibition of somking on public places is best for protecting children indulging in smoking and decreases the chances of diseases
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