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Nowadays, most people learn academic study at university, but others think we should encourage to learn vocational skills more. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There has been a gradual decrease in the number of people visiting
art
 galleries in some countries. Factors responsible for
this
 low visitor turn out as well as solutions on how it can be resolved will be highlighted in the following paragraphs. A good reason for the decline is the lack of Government support. Since the swearing in of the new Governor whose major interest is in the educational sector, there has been reduced funding of the other sectors of the economy. The new Government allocated about eighty percent of the
budget revive
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budget, revive
 the educational
sector thereby
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sector, thereby
 leaving all other sectors to raise funds on their own. Another reason is due to the lack of promotion and awareness of the
art
 galleries. Most people now-a-days would rather spend time on their mobile phone engaging
on
Suggestion
with
 social media applications
such
 as Whatsapp, Facebook, Twitter and Instagram. There is little or no interest in
art
. Possible solutions to
this
 problem is that event organizers should use
art
 galleries for their shows and events, Government should ensure Arts and Culture is a mandatory course of study from Primary School till University, Government should
also
 support all sectors of the economy equally by allocating funds to aid their growth and increasing the pay of those who are willing to take up arts as a career. In conclusion,
Art
 Galleries can be a major source of income for a country if used appropriately. Tourists will
visit thereby
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visit, thereby
 creating awareness and will want to spend
in
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on
 buying the arts on display in the gallery.

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