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It is often suggested that

music

connect

Suggestion

connects

people from other cultures and from different generations.

Although

music

can connect individuals through the transmission of universal feelings, it is

also

true that sometimes divide people because some

music

genres have bad connotations associated, and due to

this

plural of "this"

these

those

two reasons I partly agree with

this

statement.

First

of all, it is well-known that

music

is universal.

Therefore

, lyrics and rhythms have the power to convey feelings which we all share, regardless of our culture or age. When we are listening a song, a part of the brain, which is responsible for transmitting us a well-being sensation, is activated. It is because of

this

common characteristic, that

music

has the power to unite people.

For example

Borb

move up and down repeatedly

Bob

Marley was a really famous singer and composer and any person, of any culture or age, like and admire him, exactly because of the feelings and emotions that his songs provoke us.

However

, sometimes

music

Suggestion

the music

can divide generations and cultures. It is common,

for

instance in

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instance, in

the USA, people who listen and sing rap and hip-hop

music

being left apart and being looked with the wrong eyes because

this

type of

music

is associated

Suggestion

with

poorer and conflicting individuals.

As a result

, sometimes a person labels another due to the

music

he likes and

that is

a reason why

music

does not always foster people of all ages

a unit of surface area equal to 100 square meters

are

from different cultures in being together. In conclusion, while songs can link people regardless of their culture or age because

music

conveys feelings we all share, it is

also

a fact that some genres of

music

are linked to a negative connotation that can split individuals.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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