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More and more people are buying ready to eat foods instead of cooking themselves. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?

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These days, most of the people prefer to have a ready-made meal
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 of preparing
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 at home. Some people think that ordering cuisine from outside is a good option to save
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 as well as energy while others like to have home-made
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.
This
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 essay will discuss both pros and cons of consuming restaurant's or packaged items.
To begin
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 with, buying ready to eat
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 result in
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 saving as one don't need to stand in the kitchen to prepare
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 and serve the family.
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, these efforts now can be utilized in a better way. To state an example, one woman who spends most of her
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 in the kitchen to make dishes for the family, now have the liberty to use
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time
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 to follow her other passion like reading or gardening.
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, considering the cost of raw vegetables and other cooking items like oil or spices, ready to eat meal has been found cheaper.
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, there are compelling reasons why some people are against the approach of having pre-cooked
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. One of the
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issues
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 is, it contains preservatives which might be harmful to human bodies. Another problem is
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food
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 is prepared in the factories so it may not be hygienic. In conclusion, Its disadvantages greatly outweigh the advantages. I believe, it is not harmful to have ready to cook meal occasionally or when the
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 not
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permissible
, but one should not make it a regular practice.

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