The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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The table gives information about social and economic indicators in four countries (
Canada
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Japan
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,
Peru
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and
Zaire
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) in 1994. The indicators measured by the United Nation statistics are related to yearly personal income,
expectancy
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the expectancy
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live
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at birth, intake
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calorie
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per day and the percentage of literate adults.
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, it can be seen that
Japan
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and
Canada
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had far better economic conditions compared to
Peru
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and
Zaire
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.
Japan
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presented the highest personal income per year and life expectancy at birth ($US1570 and 78 years, respectively)
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the lowest rates were observed in
Zaire
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($130 and 47 years, respectively). The daily calorie intake per person was quite higher in
Canada
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than in
Japan
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(
3326Kcal
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3326 kcal
vs.
2846kcal
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2846 kcal
). Once more
Zaire
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showed the lowest number with 1749Kcal, behind
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Peru
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with 1927Kcal. In terms of literacy, no difference was observed between
Canada
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and
Japan
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(both with 99%), followed by
Peru
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(68%) and
Zaire
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(34%). In summary, it is very clear that social and economic factors are significantly better in
Japan
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and
Canada
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that in
Peru
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and
Zaire
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words canada, japan, peru, zaire with synonyms.
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