Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Others believe that every individual should take responsibility for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

With the advent of technology, gadgets and gizmos with ultra-modern features have flooded the market. Many people are swayed away
by
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from
this
trend and buying these products than ever before. I believe it is not ideal nor it is beneficial to purchase these products as adds up to unnecessary expenditure and
also
damage our ecosystem. To embark upon, buying the latest
cellphones
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cell phones
or laptops
make
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makes
people spendthrift.
This
is because of companies in order to make
high profits and to
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high profits and
stay competitive, release updates of products every six months.
Although
the changes are very cosmetics, it lures consumers’ to update with the new version as they feel the latest product is more superior.
For example
, according to the recent article published in the daily newspaper, 70 percent of people in the UK are replacing their old iPads with new ones influenced by updates. Customers are buying these updated
products
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products, thus
thus
adding a big dent
to
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in
their wallets.
Secondly
, over usage of electronic devices has a negative influence on our environment. The primary reason for
this
is that modern gadgets
such
as laptops, mobile phones come with excessive packaging. Disposal of
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plural of "this"
these
those
heaps of garbage is hard to manage and are being disposed of into our ecosystem
such
as rivers and seas which is causing pollution. To illustrate
this
, according to Oxford University, about 300 whales are dying every year due to the garbage thrown into
seas
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the seas
and
this
number is likely to be double in the coming years.
Therefore
, people should think twice before purchasing anything. In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that the popularity of high-end sophisticated appliances is
adding
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added
to the debts.
Moreover
, it is degrading our environment. It is recommended people should be cautious before buying any new gadget.

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