Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.

It can be seen that
environment
Suggestion
the environment
is a crucial topic on TV or social media in these
day
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days
and age. Some people opine that only government and large companies have the ability to improve
environment
Suggestion
environmental
problems.
However
, I disagree with
this
statement and I don't think that individuals cannot do anything to mitigate the harm to
environment
Suggestion
the environment
. In
this
essay, I will be elaborating on the point of view and offer my input in following passenger. Many people believe that government
have
Suggestion
has
the power and authority to supervise any industrial development and commercial construction in order to prevent the illegal
expoitation
the act of making some area of land or water more profitable or productive or useful
exploitation
expectation
and
environment
Suggestion
environmental
destruction. Ordinary citizens don't have the right to conduct the action.
Also
, some prosperous
cooperations
a business firm whose articles of incorporation have been approved in some state
corporations
can input fund to support the scientist and engineers to invent new technology to solve environmental problems or substitute energy for the shortage of energy.
However
, I think that each person has the obligation to protect our planet and everyone has the capability
too
in the direction of
to
.
For example
, we can reduce the usage of plastic bags and make sure to
do
engage in
make
recycling at home.
Second
, we can take the public transportation or cycling
instead
of driving.
Third
, we can learn to
being
Suggestion
be
an
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a
flexitarian
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Flexitarian
, to eat a bit of meat and a lot of vegetables. In conclusion, there are more and more people have
awareness
Suggestion
an awareness
that we should take actions to protect our
planet even
Accept comma addition
planet, even
though
government
Suggestion
the government
and large companies can do more things than individuals. As long as the worldwide people can contribute a bit to the earth, we definitely can see a
tremedous
extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree
tremendous
improvement and we will have a better world.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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