Success in business can be assured if you have great marketing and promotion. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It
can not
can not
cannot
be denied that many companies spend a colossal amount of money on advertising their products or services. Some people claim that marketing and promotion
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are
the principal reason for a successful business. In my opinion, it is not through advertising to bring the success to a business but
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through the
quality
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of products or services to help maintain
loyalty
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the loyalty
of customers. Obviously, marketing and promotion creates a huge impact on selling products or services. Thanks to effective advertising, companies can produce brand awareness to the public, especially the target customers.
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also
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the reason why so many new or unknown companies employ mass media to publicize their products and establish their position in the market.
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, there is another
certain
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certainty
that
quality
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of products or services play the equal role in a successful business. After all, no matter how popular the products or services are by using advertising, if they are poor
standards
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standards, then
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they can not
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longer
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long
in a competitive market. The consumers now are more conscious and have a lot of other alternative brands to satisfy their standards.
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,
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quality consistency
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quality, consistency
helps build brand credibility of the company and maintain customers’ loyalty to their products.
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, there are a variety of shampoo brands I know and experienced through advertising on
television but
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television, but
I have spent my full loyalty to Pentin brand which gives me a satisfaction for many years
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with
its high
quality
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. In conclusion,
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we have to admit the necessary of marketing and promotion as it is strategy to attract customers, I strongly believe that a good
quality
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of products and services should
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be paid equal attention because it helps companies build the consumers’ trust and the company’s reputation.
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