Marketing and promotion is the key to a successful business.

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Marketing nowadays plays an important and essential role in modern
business
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. It has been argued that a company with
excellent marketing
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an excellent marketing strategy
strategy
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would be definitely successful.
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seems a rather good
idea but
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idea, but
not enough, in several aspects, we can see that there is one factor which is very significant,
quality
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and when combining with a good marketing will create a good achievement for the
business
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. Marketing is the intermediary link between the
business
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and
market
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. It increases the awareness of
consumer
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consumers
the consumer
about the products, creates
market
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’s demand. In the competitive
market
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, any
brand
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which wants to exist must be spread to public.
Business
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therefore
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endeavor
a purposeful or industrious undertaking (especially one that requires effort or boldness)
endeavour
to conduct promotion their products, help their products be well-known. Through
product
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promotion, the consumers will understand more about the
product
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, the appearances of them in the
market
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, they will know more about the benefits, the functions,
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of the
product
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and realize their need. An excellent marketing
strategy
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can dislodge their opponents out of the
market
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, widen their
brand
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identified level and from that increase the revenue of the company. Marketing and Promotion are indispensable activities which not only decide the position of a
brand
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in the
market
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, attract the customer’s
attention but
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attention, but
also
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find out the demand of
customer
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the customer
customers
to find out the approach to meet the customer’s need.
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, marketing is only one part creating the success for the
business
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. An intelligent marketing
strategy
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combining with high
quality
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product
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will receive the dependence from the consumers. A high
quality
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product
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will keep the loyalty, credibility and from that the
brand
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will be easier to maintain in the
market
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. No matter how good the products are, if they are not advertised
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in
the
market
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, they will never be bought by consumers and the
business
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will never develop quickly.
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, with a smart marketing
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strategy but
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strategy, but
poor
quality
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, the products cannot be consumed.
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, those brands will lose the trust and easily be rejected. We cannot deny the roles of marketing in
modern
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the modern market
modern markets
market
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,
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, the
business
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should ensure the
quality
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of the products. A successful
business
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always knows to combine good
quality
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with intelligent marketing
strategy
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Visibility
  • Market recognition
  • Digital marketing
  • Social media
  • Search Engine Optimization (SEO)
  • Online advertising
  • Consumer behavior
  • Brand loyalty
  • Purchasing decisions
  • Brand identity
  • Ethical concerns
  • Financial burden
  • Innovation
  • Saturated market
  • Customer engagement
  • Traditional vs. modern marketing
  • Market trends
  • Feedback analysis
  • Adaptability
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