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Today, more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.

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In recent years, tourists like to visit new sites with adventures more than the museums and historical places.
This
 issue
show
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shows
 many pros and Cons as will now be discussed. The main reason that the
travelers
a person who changes location
travellers
 are nowadays attracted to visit places with difficult conditions
such
 as
Sahara desert
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the Sahara desert
 and
Antarctic
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the Antarctic
seeking
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is seeking
 for adventures and the joy has many benefits.
First
 of all, it
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considers
is considered
 as new source of tourism in countries that haven't any historical attractions.
Moreover
, with the new increase of yours in, the rate of
employmee
a worker who is hired to perform a job
employee
employees
 who work in
this
 field will arise which lead to nourish the economy of the countries.
On the other hand
, there are many drawbacks of
this
 new
attractions
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attraction
.
Firstly
, these places is not safe and secure for
travelers which
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travellers, which
travellers which
 may lead to a catastrophic
accidents
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accident
.
In addition
 to these places show wild
animals animals
a living organism characterized by voluntary movement
animals
 and birds that may be dangerous for
travelers
a person who changes location
travellers
. As a result the
travelers
a person who changes location
travellers
 would have
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disturbed
 the eco-system and the environment. In conclusion, new attractions with different conditions that attract tourists may have both comparable feeling of fulfillment as above-mentioned results

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