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Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country

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Working abroad means working far from your homeland. “Would you consider working in
foreign
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a foreign country
foreign countries
country
?”
most
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Most
 of our answers will be yes. It is not at all surprising, because now a days it has become trend to work in
developed
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developed countries
a developed country
country
 and maintain their western lifestyle. In
this
 essay I am going to discuss the pros and cons of
this
. Living abroad can be exited in many ways because of numerous advantages. I am going to discuss two main benefits of heading to developed countries. One of the primary reasons of migration is better employment opportunities. When people don’t get enough chance to work according their skills or standards, or they feel that they are being under paid in their own
country
, they consider an option of moving out to other nations.
Number
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The number
 of foreign employees are rising in developed nations, as they are
earing
the act of consuming food
eating
earning
wearing
 better
renumeration
something that remunerates
remuneration
enumeration
 with attractive perks like advance medical facilities, annual holiday packages, better living space, better education for their kids. That means, handsome salary is the biggest advantage of moving to the developed countries.
Idea
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The idea
 of travelling the world can excite to anyone. In my opinion the
second
 major advantage of shifting to
foreign
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a foreign country
country
 is exploring different places and Independent lifestyle. Youngsters are more likely to work in
free environment
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a free environment
. They don’t like any kind of interference in their personal and professional and in parallel, they would like to roam around the world. So, moving from their home
country
 offers them a global environment and freedom both.
However
, living in
advanced
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an advanced country
country
 seems fascinating, it has some challenges as well.
First
 cons of adjusting
in
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to
 a new
country
is learning
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are learning
 foreign language and adjusting in different culture. Many times, people need to change their eating habits, lifestyle and have to adjust in foreign weather.
need
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Need
 to do
lot
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lots
 of struggle to stay and earn at different nation. Another drawback of settling abroad is family separation. Now a
days
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day
 at least one member from most of families is living in
different
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different countries
a different country
country
. Their family must wait for the holiday season to meet their loved once.
As a result
, kids
also
 don’t get the enough love and care from their grandparents and relative. People who depart their countries, bear the pain of separation.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • quality education
  • high standard of living
  • diverse cultures
  • strong healthcare system
  • career advancement
  • safe and stable environment
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