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You need a equipment to do your job well explain: * what is the equipment *why do you need it *what you want manager do.

#equipment #job #*why #*what #manager
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Dear manager, I am writing
this
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 letter with regard to install one more
computer
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 in my cabin in order to complete my
work
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 within
given deadline
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given deadlines
a given deadline
the given deadline
. As you know, two months ago, I have been given a trainee to assist me. But he is very slow at
work
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 and keeps busy my system. Due to
this
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, I am not being able to complete my
work
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 on time. It has been more than 2 months to me working overtime so that I could possibly complete my
work
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in
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on
 time, but still I am getting complaints from clients for delaying in
work
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. I have already written an application to IT department in order to get a
computer
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. But it doesn’t seem, I will get any reply from their side. Mr. Manager, I want you please get me a
computer
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 for my assistant. If
company
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a company
the company
 doesn’t arrange a
computer
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, transfer him to another cabin.
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, I request you to kindly look into
this
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 matter at the earliest. Looking forward your reply. Yours sincerely Ranny 😊
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