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You have just read an article in an inernational travel magazie which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of magazie. IN your letter - Correct the information in the article - Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information - Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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Dear Sir, I am a citizen of Ahmedabad city, located in state Gujarat, India. I am writing
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letter
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 to draw your attention
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the article printed in 'Beauty of Wolrd' magazine of July 2019 edition. In your
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 edition of
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magazine
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 there was
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of
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 my home town and it represented that the beauty of
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 was amazing at Ahmedabad. But, there is not any
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 in my town. The picture displayed in that was of Gandhinagar
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 which is 50km far from my home town. I assume that
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 was misprinted. There is a huge
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 associated
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Gandhingar
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Gandhinagar
 and it is a very famous picnic place
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. So,
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a visitor
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visitor
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visitors
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 should not
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realted
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related
 to the place and
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geographical
 location when they come to visit the place from the foreign. It is very important as a reputation of the city as well. It is
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 responsibility to provide
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 and
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appropriate
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 to the reader.
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 when the
audiance
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audience
 are from out of the country. The
editior
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editor
 should print the updated
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 in the
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adition
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edition
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accurate
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 about
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the place
. Hoping for your
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 response and correct the
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. Yours Faithfully, ABC
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