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Schools should not force children to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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It is true that some people complain that children should not be forced to learn a foreign language in school. The schooling s
istem
instrumentality that combines interrelated interacting artifacts designed to work as a coherent entity
system
systems
could be reviewed to give more space t
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for
other activities. Despite the fact that there a
re are
a unit of surface area equal to 100 square meters
are
other moments in which they can learn
this
 skill, I claim
this
 teaching should be kept. On the one hand is commonly thought that schools give non-priority lessons which could be replaced by others, and language classes are one of these. Kids nowadays are not taught anymore everyday jobs
such
 as cleaning or cooking, because there is no time to do
this
 at school. Indeed, removing a foreign language from the timetable would leave space for other teachings.
Also
,
this
 does not imply not to teach languages at all, but just post-dating to their adulthood. On the other side kids are quick learner and learning to communicate is very important. As a matter of fact, before the 10 years children are very open minded and can memorize a lot more than an adult would. It
also
 needs to be noticed that not everybody can afford to pay someone to teach their son after school, nor everybody would like to.
Furthermore
, languages are not only important for cultural aspects, but
also
 because they can allow to move around the world and start a better career. As an e
xample it
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example, it
would be impossible for an Italian to get a job in the United Kingdom without a good knowledge of English. In conclusion, people claim that the teaching of languages should not be compulsory in schools, but I believe
that is
 not only important, but
also
 necessary.
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