When new towns are planned, it is more important to include public parks and sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time into what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is very crucial in the

time

of planning novice cities that what should be the main criteria of that

town

. It is said that recreational space and sports amenities should be included f

or

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in

public to spend their leisure

time

instead

of high raised malls. I am, holistically,

second

to

this

thought due to the fact that people find more interest in spending

time

in parks and doing exercise than buying goods.

First

and foremost, when the government thinks to execute a fresh terrain, the priority of entertainment facilities g

o

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goes

fast.

This

is because, people, in general, love to reside those cities which have amusement privilege. For that reason, the authority must decorate the new region with general parks, gym, fitness club, et Cetra in lieu of constructing myriads of shopping malls. The reason is that,

for example

, if in each nook and corner markets are available, people would tend to s

hop leaving

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shop, leaving

the thought of spending pleasure

time

in open space.

Furthermore

, rarely people show interest in going sports club, if it is not ubiquitous.

Therefore

, the administrators along with c

ommons

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common

people know how pivotal it is to spend in free air rather than sticking on boring shopping.

In contrast

, if the leader of the rejuvenate realm reckons that retail markets could provide people to spend their idle

time

in his kingdom, it is w

rong idea.

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a wrong idea

the wrong idea

Because of its contradictory outcome, people would become gloomy for the absence of natural entertainment and athletic e

nvironment even

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environment, even

though shopping business boosts the economy of that

town

. Thinking about leisure activities of p

ublic,

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the public

for instance

, in the USA, studies have shown that 99% of

town

designer think o

f

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about

parks and sports space when they build any cities

instead

of erecting malls.

This

, certainly, helps public not only to gain good body and m

ind but

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mind, but

also

keep them away from expenses.

Moreover

, if markets are here and there, people will not be able to spend free

time

t

o

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in

such

places because it will be crowded all the

time

, so one or two shopping malls are enough. In conclusion, entertainment parks and game club should be built in n

ew

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the new town

a new town

town

, because here, people can escape from their hectic days

instead

of going supermarkets. I, totally, agree that shopping malls are not a place of spending entimacy , only parks