You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his/her performance give details of your music-related activities explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities Write at least 150 words.
Hi,
I am Madhuri. I have recently attended your concert which was held in Jaipur
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August15th,2019.
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to encourage you to do more in your life. That was really a splendid performance. Those claps were real and you deserve it.
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Furthermore
, your song selection according to your voice makes us awe-struck and I went back to my childhood, felt so alive. I learned Music at the age of 7 and wrote certain Linking Words
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Your’s lovingly,
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.