Some people think that libraries are a waste of resources and money so computers should replace them. However, others do not agree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In the contemporary era of technology and computers, few believe that libraries are mere the wastage of paper money and the crucial resources, whose use can be easily
replacable
with the computer's. capable of being replaced
replaceable
On the contrary
, others are of the opinion that nothing can replace the usage
of written textbooks and journals. Below paragraphs will shed some light on both views and reasons of their assertion.
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This
school of thought believes in this
because of the various reasons. Mainly, computers are in this
world for more than three decades and even with the help of these supercomputers, space travel becomes reality but still more and more libraries are getting inaugrated
. formed or united into a whole
integrated
Secondly
, authenticity of the information is also
a major contributor in the existence of libraries. For instance
, on the internet, there are numerous hoax websites which can not
be trusted for news and people cross verify the information in the newspapers and magazines as the publication are bound to print the authentic material.And spending resources for the trusted information will always be more can not
cannot
weightful
.
Others believe that in the fast showing pensive sadness
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of knowledge which can be easily fulfilled at home with the access to a physiological need to drink
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the internet
Furthermore
, computers are replacing man power in the factories, industries and even teachers in many universities have been replaced with the recorded online courses and smart labs. In the same manner, libraries will be obsolete in future
and investing valuable resources in the thing of no longer use is Suggestion
the future
also
a wastage.
Both groups have their own thought and assumptions which make them believe that computers should replace the libraries and others believe that libraries can not
be replaced with today's new inventions.In my can not
cannot
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, usage of libraries for reading hard books and to feel the touch of the paper a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
can not
be can not
cannot
replcaed
with the electronic substitute a person or thing for (another that is broken or inefficient or lost or no longer working or yielding what is expected)
replaced
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books though
libraries will be of lesser use in future due to increasing options.Accept comma addition
books, though
Moreover
, both the things should go hand in hand as the incorboration
of computers in the consolidating two or more things; union in (or into) one body
incorporation
libraries
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