Some people think that libraries are a waste of resources and money so computers should replace them. However, others do not agree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
In the contemporary era of technology and computers, few believe that libraries are mere the wastage of paper money and the crucial resources, whose use can be easily
replacable
capable of being replaced
replaceable
with the computer's.
On the contrary
Linking Words
, others are of the opinion that nothing can replace the
usage
Suggestion
use
of written textbooks and journals. Below paragraphs will shed some light on both views and reasons of their assertion. One side is of the favour that libraries are the one of the
multibagger
Suggestion
investment and nothing can replace their role
.
Accept space
.
This
Linking Words
school of thought believes in
this
Linking Words
because of the various reasons. Mainly, computers are in
this
Linking Words
world for more than three decades and even with the help of these supercomputers, space travel becomes reality but still more and more libraries are getting
inaugrated
formed or united into a whole
integrated
.
Secondly
Linking Words
, authenticity of the information is
also
Linking Words
a major contributor in the existence of libraries.
For instance
Linking Words
, on the internet, there are numerous hoax websites which
can not
can not
cannot
be trusted for news and people cross verify the information in the newspapers and magazines as the publication are bound to print the authentic material.And spending resources for the trusted information will always be more
weightful
showing pensive sadness
wistful
. Others believe that in the fast
pacing
Suggestion
paced
lives, no one has time to travel to the libraries to satiate their
thurst
a physiological need to drink
thirst
of knowledge which can be easily fulfilled at home with the access to
internet
Suggestion
the internet
.
Furthermore
Linking Words
, computers are replacing man power in the factories, industries and even teachers in many universities have been replaced with the recorded online courses and smart labs. In the same manner, libraries will be obsolete in
future
Suggestion
the future
and investing valuable resources in the thing of no longer use is
also
Linking Words
a wastage. Both groups have their own thought and assumptions which make them believe that computers should replace the libraries and others believe that libraries
can not
can not
cannot
be replaced with today's new inventions.In my
opnion
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
, usage of libraries for reading hard books and to feel the touch of the paper
can not
can not
cannot
be
replcaed
substitute a person or thing for (another that is broken or inefficient or lost or no longer working or yielding what is expected)
replaced
replicated
with the electronic
books though
Accept comma addition
books, though
libraries will be of lesser use in future due to increasing options.
Moreover
Linking Words
, both the things should go hand in hand as the
incorboration
consolidating two or more things; union in (or into) one body
incorporation
of computers in the
libraries
Suggestion
library
will
server
Suggestion
serve
the purpose.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • repository
  • cultural hub
  • community engagement
  • digital divide
  • inequality
  • sustainable
  • affordability
  • technological advancement
  • information retrieval
  • hybrid resources
  • social interaction
  • evolution of libraries
  • complementary
  • access to information
What to do next:
Look at other essays: