First impression is important. Some people think doing well in an interview is key to securing a good job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals opine that succeeding in interviews guarantee a gainful employment. I completely agree with
this
view because the Labour market is volatile and offers limited chances so when afforded an opportunity, it should be taken. One on one assessment is one of the screening techniques organisations adopt for prospective employees. With the high unemployment indices, standing out doing the interview can increase employment opportunities and I agree.
For instance
, a big oil firm in my town interviewed 2000 (two thousand) candidates to choose the person whom impressed the most.
In addition
, I think a chat enables an applicant defends his or her credential and an opportunity to show qualities needed for the role beyond his or her curriculum vitae. I believe a terrible performance during verbal assessment can limit the chances of securing a good job.
Also
, not being able to communicate confidently can raise the question about the integrity of your past achievement.
For instance
, claiming to have a masters in English and being unable to interact fluently during a seat down.
Furthermore
, with a high competition for quality jobs, failure to convince will make you not hired.
However
, if a person during an interview gives a stellar performance, the chances of getting a job
increases
Suggestion
increase
.
This
is why I support the opinion that
first
impression is key to a successful work. In conclusion, I am convinced that impressing in assessment is a major determinant in getting a good employment.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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